August 23rd, 2009

thedeadparrot

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Draft has been typed up and slightly edited! It's at about 6,700 words right now, though who knows what will happen once my betas get at it.

Anyway, here, have some more chat log:

(10:02:05 PM) thedeadparrot: i also think there probably needs to be more sex in the beginning
(10:02:38 PM) Zulu: mm, or sexuality in Kirk's thoughts
(10:02:45 PM) Zulu: or, hey! BOTH.
(10:03:20 PM) thedeadparrot: basically yes
(10:03:35 PM) thedeadparrot: it's all violence and bureaucracy right now